Sunday, September 11, 2011

I'm STILL Thinking About You

One day you said goodbye but I could never wrap my mind around that
My life has never been the same
Five months go by and you say you've been thinking about me
You say you've been thinking about me?!
Don't even get me started

I've been thinking about you like the sun thinks about the sunrise
Like the sunrise thinks about sunset
Like the sunset thinks about the stars
Like you and I used to look at the stars 

I've been thinking about you like nightmares think about monsters
Like nightmares that are your day dreams
Like you wish monsters were all you worried about
Like my pillows wonder why I'm crying

I've been thinking about you like wanderers think about a home
Like dreams think about happening
Like memories think about remembering
Like I wish I could soften the memories of you

I'm still thinking about you like warmth thinks about bodies
Like bodies think about holding
Like arms think about molding
Like your arms folded right around me

I'm still thinking about you like words think about talking
Like talking thinks about knowing
Like knowing tries to understand but fails miserably
Like failures lead to success
Like your failure to know may lead to my success
Like success can't come without trials
Like trials can't come without heartache
Like love can't come without hearthache
Like I wish I could understand why
Like you wish your life would come together

Like time thinks about sand
and sand thinks about toes
and toes think about feet who think about walking on the beach
that thinks about holding your hand

One day I might stop thinking about you
But for now it's a bitter sweet memory that doesn't seem real
that might not be real for how could something so sweet end so sour
I'm thinking about you like a true love would never forget

6 comments:

  1. I love that you put pictures on this.

    "But for now it's a bitter sweet memory that doesn't seem real..." Great work.

    You can really feel the emotion in your writing.

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  2. "like you and i used to look at the stars" ah i love it!!!

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  3. This is really creative. i like it a lot. :)

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  4. So neat how it's all connected!! Keep it up!!!!

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  5. You are an incredible writer and you have amazing talent I'm excited to see what else you have to write.

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  6. Your writing gave me chills.
    Especially the end! I'm thinking about you like a true love would never forget.
    My favorite line was Like dreams think about happening.
    I love it, and the way you write is unreal. You are one of my favorites!

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